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Workshop Wednesday #1

10/3/2018

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So, part of my writing routine involves doing standalone scenes periodically, whether to practice a specific part of the craft, or to work on alternate openings and test settings for manuscripts currently in the works.

I decided to share a relatively recent piece in which the goal was to write a locale with an exotic feel as a potential opening scene for a Jax Jensen novel. For those of you who don't know, Jax Jensen is the protagonist from my earliest short stories which you can find in a little bundle on Kindle. I am currently working on the first novel in the series right now, after promising and then being distracted by other writing projects for the last couple of years. (I promise it is coming!)

I hope you enjoy reading the scene as much as I enjoyed writing it. Please keep in mind it is only lightly edited and still relatively raw. If you want to share any thoughts, share your work, or would like to see more posts like this in the future,  drop a comment below! For future scenes, if there is any requests for it, I was considering adding in commentary explaining the craft-side purposes for certain paragraphs, word choices, or other relevant writing craft related things.


Scene Description:

​Jax Jensen is a special agent for an organization called the Department of Inquiry, that serves the Intergalactic Federation of Free Planets.  Think a role heavily influenced by Judge Dredd, or Imperial Guard/Soviet Commissar.  The role of the DOI Agent is to essentially do internal investigations, and crack down on corruption or disloyalty.

In the scene below, designed to be an opener for a piece, he has freshly arrived at his hotel in a tropical paradise and is taking in the scenery, and talking with his AI Assistant Keeper, before a startling turn of events. 

Jax Jensen, a Special Agent with the Department Of Inquiry, stepped out onto the windswept gallery that ringed the fifth story of the Regal Stay Resort. Jensen swirled a cognac colored liquid around the short glass snifter cradled in his left hand as a light breeze carried the scent of ocean brine and a faint taste of saltiness to his lips.

Shivering slightly, He was still settling into the more relaxed atmosphere that swim trunks and a light t-shirt offered. It was a stark, but welcome, break from the heavy uniform he was normally confined to. His sandals clacked along the tiled walkway as he strolled, stepping to the rhythm of waves crashing against a cliffside that vanished into white churning depths below. Coming to a stop, Jensen ran his hand along the steel rail which capped the outer wall. His eyes slowly scanned the massive crowds gathered on the pearlescent beach below, who were sprawled out in hundreds of small groups divided into camps of multi-colored umbrellas and fields of beach towels. Following the distinct wakes of sleek watercraft as they carved graceful trails a mile out, Jensen noticed two single-man cutters in a seemingly reckless pursuit of one another.

“Oh my, fallen into the lap of luxury have we?” Keeper’s voice broke the sounds of paradise, a haughty and slightly condescending tone lacing his words. “Don’t get too comfortable.”

“Pipe down.” Jensen scowled at the comm-link bound around his wrist, “make yourself useful and find out who botched my travel arrangements back in McCarr to get me a room in this place.” He ran a hand through his hair and leaned forward on the railing taking a draw of the cognac while watching the cutters’ game of chase. The smooth liquid mixed well with the salted air. His gaze wandered from the cutters a little ways away to a much more rundown--affordable as the Department’s financial officers would call it—travel lodge whose sun-bleached pool and spotty walls contrasted greatly with the freshly painted exterior of the more modern Regal Stay. The smaller lodging looked as if a painter had chosen the color palette from a selection of vomit bile hues.

“It seems your lodging was made by President Brant’s office, not the DOI Travel Officer.”

“There is a god. Or ... gods.” Jensen muttered, “damn the travel officers.”

“Glenda is a lovely woman.” Keeper said, “throws fantastic parties.”

“What would you know about that?” Jensen cocked an eyebrow, his interest returning to his comm-link. “She doesn’t throw parties.”

“None that you’re invited to. I however am granted access through her own Home Interface Systems. Lovely lady.”

“Whatever, Keeps.” Jensen wasn’t sure whether to believe his AI assistant’s outlandish claim. “What’s my assignment brief say?”

“Standard apprehension.” Keeper muttered incoherently, mimicking the droning habit he’d picked up off a congressional staffer as he pretended to skim through the pages of assignment details. Even though Jensen knew that his assistant had processed all of the information in less than a second. “Intel thinks the cartel knows you’ve been dispatched here.”

“Me specifically?”

“An agent in general.” Keeper answered.

“Go on…” Jensen swirled his drink.

“An asset of the Dark Hearts cartel has been operating a highly lucrative gambling business beneath the nose of the Kalgary Gaming Commission. Seems like a pretty profitable drug smuggling gig too.”

“Seems a bit excessive to call a DOI agent out here for something local officials should be handling.” Jensen took another long draw, watching out of the corner of his eye as a rather fetching woman in a tight fitting, flowery cocktail dress stepped out from her room onto the same gallery. I need to remember to send Brant’s office a handwritten thank you.

“Er, well.” Keeper hesitated. “The fact that the illicit gains are funding a hefty portion of the RLF efforts on Renia took it out of local hands.” Keeper paused, then quickly, “and the fact that thirteen local officers have wound up dead trying to stop i—”

“What?” Jensen stifled a choke, mid-sip, “lead with that next time.” A sudden feeling of vulnerability swept away the relaxation that had set in, and the fact that he was so exposed out on the gallery came to the forefront of his mind.

Jensen stepped back from the railing, scanning a few of the other high rise buildings that dotted the area. Sunlight reflecting off the glass walls of other luxury towers hindered his effort to scan all the areas an observer could hide, no matter how fiercely he squinted.

“You’ve been out here for a few minutes now, don’t let the fear ruin your luck.”

“Easy for the disembodied assistant to say.” Turning back toward his door, Jensen lifted the snifter to down the last of his brandy. The glass exploded in his hand, seemingly on contact as it brushed his lips.

Jensen fell in a quick spiral, landing with his back toward the Regal Stay’s inside wall. Taking cover, a sharp crack whipped the air, a bite was taken from the smooth concrete wall. Blood streamed from his lips and hand, disorientation playing with his senses. A shriek erupted from the nearby woman as she ran inside.

“Jax!” Keeper shouted.

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The Cover For the First Jax Jensen Novel!

1/22/2016

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I am extremely excited to share the cover for the first full length Jax Jensen novel. That's right! Not just a short story... a full length novel that is set after the short stories. Let me know what you think of it below, it was made by my very talented friend Gary. Check out more of his work here.
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I really feel like Gary did an excellent job capturing the hustle of a big city, where this novel takes place, and does a good job leaving a sense of wonder and a feeling of expanse that ideally is engaging enough to capture reader's attention.

What do you think of the cover? What are some of your favorite covers that you've seen, or made yourself!

Share in the comments below I'd love to hear input.

Thank you. Keep writing!

-Matt
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